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What's New:
✦ Extended scenes with deeper depth.

✦ Bonus content only in this edition, including interconnected short stories.

Book One of Intertwined Destinies – Expanded Edition


Lucy’s spent her whole life running—from her mother’s memory, her own secrets, and a city that tried to break her. When Damien, a hot-tempered ex who knows too much, barrels back into her life, she’s forced to confront the past she thought she’d buried. But Damien wants more than forgiveness—he wants to claim her.
In this gritty, emotionally raw expanded edition, uncover never-before-seen scenes and a deeper dive into Lucy’s twisted choices, haunting dreams, and the ghost of the girl she used to be.

Book Two of Intertwined Destinies—Expanded Edition


She was trained to survive—but no one warned her what it would cost to stay alive.
As a former assassin with global reach, Mackenzie thought she’d outrun danger. But betrayal from within leaves her hunted, exposed, and trapped in a deadly game where everyone wants something from her—including the family she married into.
While Samuel searches the dark corners of Dubai’s underworld for the truth, Mackenzie is forced to decide who she can trust—if anyone. And as her brother Damien tries to escape his past, old wounds and buried secrets resurface.
This expanded edition delves deeper into Mackenzie’s motivations, unveils a brand-new short story about her marriage to Samuel, and lays bare the brutal question: What happens when survival demands becoming the villain?

Book Three of Intertwined Destinies—Expanded Edition

 

Fresh out of prison, Damien is determined to turn his life around—but the past won’t let him go. Not just the crimes, the regrets, or the people he hurt… but something older. Something deeper. Weeks before his release, he’s haunted by a vision of a woman dressed in 1880s mourning, who warns him: "Mend what has been shattered, for this—this is our last life granted to set things aright.

Across the country, Lucy’s world begins to fracture. What started as dreams quickly spiral into full-blown visions—unexplained glimpses of another time, another woman’s sorrow, and a warning she can’t ignore. As she investigates her mother’s mysterious death, Lucy is pulled into dangerous territory—and it’s more than just the living she needs to fear.

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